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Do’s and Don’ts for Writing a Standout College Essay

For US college admissions, the essay is one of the most important components of the application. Colleges are inundated with qualified candidates with great SAT, ACT, or SSAT scores. There are those who had the experience and resources of being taught by an IB English tutor, which gives them an advantage in creating essays for college admissions. The essay can have a great weight when admissions officers decide on your application. It is important to keep the following points in mind to ensure you produce the best essay that will make your application stand out.

DO: Make the essay about yourself

College admissions committees are reading your essay to learn about YOU. Many students make the mistake of writing too much about SAT scores, classes, organizations, or other things that they are a part of. While it is great to include these things in your essay, do not waste space on detailed descriptions. The majority of the essay should tell the reader something about who you are.

DON’T: Turn the essay into a resume

US college admissions are “holistic” and the essay is the best opportunity to show who you are beyond GPA and SAT or ACT scores. Your essay needs to add value and you can do this is by telling the admissions committee something they don’t already know from your transcript or resume.

DO: Support your essay with examples

The clearest way to teach colleges something about you is with an example. Examples allow you to paint a picture for the reader. Broad, unsubstantiated claims about yourself won’t impress admissions officers and will make your essay appear shallow. Ask your IB English tutor how to write great examples for your essays and make your college admissions more appealing.

DON’T: Use clichés

Over the years, admissions officers have received countless essays about “life changing” service trips to third world countries or about how someone’s life was changed by volunteering at a local soup kitchen. Essays like this are common and come across as contrived. It’s important that your essay is genuine and stands out from others.

DO: Have a point

The college essay is short, generally around 650 words. Within this length, it’s important to have one overarching theme with a unifying narrative. There shouldn’t be excessive tangents or side-stories. Don’t try to jam as much information or stories as possible into that short space. Focus on developing one idea instead. Writing an essay like this requires significant planning and forethought.

DON’T: Try to do it all on your own

When planning and editing your essay you should have as many people as possible look it over and give you feedback. One of the best ways to ensure you write the best essay possible is by hiring a college admissions consultant. Admissions consultants have written and edited hundreds of essays and they can help you identify the good and the bad. If you’re a younger student, it is highly recommended that you hire a private tutor early. IB English tutors, SAT tutors, and ACT tutors can help you develop strong writing skills long before you begin the college admissions process and even help your application stand out by preparing you for advanced classes like IB English.

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